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hold my hand
through it all

hold my hand
don't let me fall

I will give all of my love to you
all I want in return is for you to be true

if you leave
I will die

hold my hand while i cut myself
if that is what you want then that is what you get it

hold my lifeless hand in yours
know that I would not have changed my life

hold my hand
while I take my life

in his last breath he says
now I know how good you were to me
it took me so long to see
I am sorry that I was untrue

now two lovers are taken from this world
now you can see how their lives were spoiled

Life is taken with words unspoken
©2006-2009 ~wishicouldflyaway
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this poem is about two lovers that at first loved each other but then she finds out that he is not true to her and she kills herslef. in the end he finds her when it is to late and he wants her. he kills himself so that he can be with her.

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:iconmrniklaus:
Oooooh. Very interesting perspective, much like mine. I like the minimalistic form that still makes you feel something churn in your gut because it feels like it has happened to myself (It has, except for the killing myself part lol)

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"So, you want to see if the carpet matches the drapes huh? Well, only the luckiest of women get to find out." b^^
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AWWW!!
That is so sweet

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Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Men are like bank accounts.
Without a lot of money they don't generate a lot of interest.
:iconkimiko123:
Sucha lovely poem!

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"No one can change the past. The only thing we can do is strive to make up for our mistakes, so that we can find the way back to our path towards a brighter future." - Phoenix Wright
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ok

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Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Men are like bank accounts.
Without a lot of money they don't generate a lot of interest.
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NP

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Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Men are like bank accounts.
Without a lot of money they don't generate a lot of interest.

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